1- My name is George Safar, I am a young and hungry business man and I am willing to go the extra mile to reach ultimate success. I have owned my first biasness when I was 19 and I have been killing since then by staying focused and being creative and always finding new ways to reach my customers. Enterpunrship is in my blood, and every day for me is a challenge to solve any problem that I face in my daily life. Who inspires me? The best of the best, Mark Cuban, élan Musk, Ray Kroc and many others who wrote their name in the book of history forever. My business is my life, I wake up and sleep to it and I never quite or get bored, because failure is never an option.
2- I am offering a advertainment and consulting company with a major chance to become a manufacturing company in a huge emerging industry which is high end electric cars and transportation devices. We are trying to change the way that consumers look at electric transportation devise and help make them a must have item in every home across the globe.
3- We are a B2B business and a business to consumers as well. We can help the major companies in the market to develop new designs that cost less and looks better. To add on, we can also act as a communication bridge between the customer (especially young people) and these car companies, we can collect feedback and reviews about models and reviews, so these manufacturing companies can know what people want exactly and try to fulfil their requests.
Also, we can be a consumer-based company if we start manufacturing some affordable electric scooters and sell them around big campuses like UF. All the electric scooters these days are pricey, and they are not within the budget of a college students.
4- This specific industry can use all the help it can get now to reach as most customers as possible and to help make their brand famous locally and globally as well. Owning a Tesla car can be like owning an iPhone now, you must vision the process and the transformation the company need to get there or any other new company that focus on electric motors and transportation.
5- Brand recognition, it is all about brand marketing and building the right values and ideas around the product to guarantee its success.
I believe all these elements give a good general idea about the business, but I would probably like to explain more about the process of which we can use social media and other online platform to reach our goals. We can also talk about the partner ships and how we can build a network of publication relations that will help the company to be on national level.
What’s up George? I’m going to be that guy real quick and just say that you should look over your work because there are a couple of spelling errors that are easily avoidable. Next, I hate failing more than anyone, but to say it is never an option goes against what being an entrepreneur is all about! Instead of this mentality maybe have the, “there isn’t success and failure, but success and a lesson” kind of mindset.
ReplyDeleteHey George! I agree with Jeremiah as a "potential investor" in your business proposal I found the numerous spelling errors disruptive in outlining your true business objective. In the future I highly suggest typing in Microsoft Word where the system naturally self correct or informs you of sentence fragments and improper spelling. However, congratulation for launching your entrepreneurial adventure at such a tender age. I know the drive you have to reach the ultimate success, will take you far.
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